Not entirely happy with how it turned out - I think it smears eyes a bit more than usual. Lowering strength or changing eye colors to "grey"/"black", or not specifying them at all might help, but you'll have to test it yourself.
As for versions, eyes and the intensity of their color are probably the biggest difference between them - attempt 2 should have a stronger blue. I think 1.1 is best overall but included the rest in case I missed some issue, test grids available as you scroll through images.

Full tags used for her kimono/hairclip/hair hold image

• Satsuki, 1girl, solo, black hair, hair ornament, long sleeves, very long hair, japanese clothes, hairclip, wide sleeves, kimono, blue eyes, sash, obi, floral print, pink kimono, bangs, hair between eyes, flower, parted bangs, holding hair

Probably don't need to use more than "pink kimono", and im not sure if hairclip works properly.

Let me know if there's any major issues I missed. Contact me here or on pixiv if you need anything.